Essay (01/29/15)

Did you know that 1 kid every 25 seconds gets injured by sports,that means that 3.5 million children under the age of 14 get hopilized every year from sports injures.Children should not be able to play contact sports sutch as fotball,soccar,basketball,and tienis.Sports like these can cause short and long term damage.Some adults today are still affected my sports injures every day every hour every mintute and every second by damge that has been cause my contact sports.Damge can be as simple as scraping your knee.Mild such as getting a conution.Or as survire as brain damage or paralization.

Lots of sports cause head injeures to kids this is because kids under 14 are more likely for injures because childerens necks are weaker and more likey to snap back during a fall.And sports such as football are offten involved in helmet to helmet combat this is why 39 foot ball players have died science 2000.And if 39 teenage foot ball playes have died science 2000 and kids are pron to injures you can only imagine how many children football players have died or suffed permenent damage science 2000.

Playing the same sport to offten can causse wear and tear on a kids body.This can affect somebody later in life such as knee pian or back pain.Scince sports ussaly requre the ussage of one boby musle or one limb such a kicking for soccar or throwing and swinging for baseball.Every day 3 thousand children get injures and 1.2 million children go to the emergincy room becue of injures every year

On the other hand playing sports does help keep teen stress levels to a minimum.Sports are good fo putting your energy into insted of otherthings that may not be healthy or good.But in 10 years 350 million kids willbe injured by sports.And about half of them have perment injures.


Over all teens should not play contact sports beacsue it causes wear and tear on a kids body it also causes perment and tempory damage and wh kake the chance of having your scild get injured nobody thinks its that it wll be therechild untill it is.

cyannMills


                     essay on " China's cram schools"




   China's way of registering and proving your "smart" enough to go to the school they want is unfair and cruel to not only the students but to the parents and the teachers. They pressure kids into doing good witch usually works but when you pressure them so much they start to become very stressed and extremely worried they are not going to do well. This usually leads to test anxiety witch can cause not just student to not do well.
     This test can effect the teachers because the test scores count on the teacher so if most her/his class has really bad test anxiety and they don't do well the school system will blame them one of the sidelines read "students desperate to pass china do or die college entrance exam flock to schools that eliminate all distractions with military precision" this shows how the teachers should be able to teach with no exceptions.the schools make sure that the students learn all they need to with VERY strict rules and boundaries and they think that the teachers should to not keeping in mind the kids who really study and work hard.
     This test effects  the students because of the great stress and pressure  the teachers the school the school system and there parents put on the students.this can cause stress lots of test anxiety. Failing the gaokao likely means ending up in a factory or construction job" even though these jobs would be a good and a well paying job but to the students this is something that is not wanted by them there teacher an most of all there parents.
      This can also be a good thing this is because  it teaches the kids to have good studing skills and they can also learn rule and position when it comes to jobs and even there new collage if they passed there test.
     Over all this test is hard and stressful for the students and the people around them such as parents and teachers this test is unfair and is cruel to the students and should not be tacking this test is unacceptable.